Shopping is activity that people usually do, especially woman. People go shopping once or twice a week. Some of them go shopping more than twice a week. In fact, there are two places that people usually visit to go shopping. The places are traditional market and modern market. These markets are different each other.
Traditional market is market that allows the buyer to bargain. The buyer who does not agree with the price can bargain into suitable price. So, people who want to shop in traditional market should be able to bargain. However, traditional market is very noisy, hot, and little dirty. There are many sellers who shout in the market. People also threw their garbage anywhere. Beside that traditional market is on the open area, so the people fell hot when they shop there. Traditional market became a wet place when rainy. Traditional market also not arrange well. Each seller always takes a place wherever they want. If people go shopping in traditional market they should be careful with their pocket or their money, because there are many pickpockets there.
On the other hand, modern market does not allow the buyer to bargain. The price in modern markets has been permanent and more expensive than in traditional market. People must pay the price base on the price tag. Although there are several discount in certain time. Shopping in the modern market is really comfortable, because modern market is clean and has special building. Modern market also provide several facilities like good building, count machine, air conditioner, escalator and stroge place. Modern market also arrange well. It is also safe.These markets are really different, so it is depend on each person where the person wants to go shopping. If the person like to get low price and do not have problem with noisy and hot market I suggest her to go to traditional market. On the other hand, if the person cannot stand with hot and noisy market I suggest her to go to modern market.

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BalasHapus*before 'traditional', there is should be a comma.
i think, shopping In Modern Market is more interesting.
BalasHapusi like shopping in modern market :)
BalasHapusI prefer to go shopping at modern market :D
BalasHapusi like both of them coz i like shopping very much,,,,,,,,,,,
BalasHapusthis essay that i revised,so no comment,,,