Al-Qur’an, the holy scripture of Moslem, say he is the most perfect man in the world. Most of people in the world also say he is the perfect man. He is kind, honest, reliable, and patient. He is also the most handsome man in the world. His face glow can defeat the moon light. His name is Muhammad SAW. He is the prophet of Moslem. He is my idol.
Muhammad was born in Rabiul Awal 12th 571 C in Makah, Saudi Arabia. He was born without a father, because his father was died when he still in his mother’s womb. After birth his mother looked for someone to suckle him. During 4 years Muhammad maintained by Haliamatus Sa’diah. When he was 4 years old his mother takes him from Haliamtus Sa’diah house and he live with her mother. Two years later, his mother brought him to visit his father grave. Her father grave was very far from his house. It takes long journey, about two days by walking.
In the way to back to his house, Muhammad mother got sick and died. After buried his mother Muhammad continued his journey to go home. Then, his grandfather took over to keep him. He lived with his grandfather for two years. When he was six years old, his grandfather died. Then his uncle took him and brings him to his house. He lived with his uncle until he got married.
He got married when he was twenty five years old. He was married with a beautiful widow named Siti Khadijah. Siti Khadijah is a rich woman. She is 40 years old. After married they got six children. Their children are Al-Qasim Abdullah, Ibrahim ,Zainab, Ruqaiyah, Ummu Kalthum, Fatimah.
When he was 40 years old Allah SWT raised to be prophet of Moslem. He got the first revelation in Gua Hira. After he got the first revelation, he stars to teach everything about Islam to people in Makah and Medina. His effort to teach Islam is very hard, because many people didn’t believe with him. Some of people who didn’t believe him insult him and accuse him had been crazy. Sometime they threw him with stone. Muhammad never replied any crime that he had received.
During his life, Muhammad always got sadness and pain but he never gave up. He is very noble. Every Moslem should imitate him.

you have the same idol with me, but you explain in different side
BalasHapusgood idea, YESSY
i think in the fifth paragraph you get wrong when you are writing after to you make verb 2: to taught but to teach. write didn't to did not
BalasHapushmmm...good essay yessy.. I've reading it ..... go ahead n spirittttttt....^^
BalasHapusthanks for your comment guys...
BalasHapusMuhammad SAW is my idol, too.
BalasHapusyour vocabulary is dfficult for me
BalasHapusI love Muhammad SAW too.. ;)
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